Jul. 14th, 2011

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-Introduction
--Establish Vivian as someone needing basic contact
--Thesis

-First scene: Going to the ER
Topic sentence: When Vivian admits herself to the ER, Susie goes beyond the normal duties of a nurse
-Susie is glad she's there that night
-Susie rushes out to get Jason
-Susie wants Kelekian to reduce the medicine dosage for the next cycle
-Susie is near Vivian, trying to help


-Second scene: Sharing the popsicle
Topic sentence: The simple act of Vivian sharing a popsicle denotes an honest desire to have Susie stay so they can talk together
--Notion of offering it so Vivian wouldn't be alone
--Second quote about degrees
--Pride over not saying she did it to Susie still there
--Quote about being scared?
--Quote 7

-Third scene: Susie trying to clean up Vivian after her death and the attempted Code Blue
--Susie carrying out Vivian's DNR request
--Susie cleaning up Vivian's body
--Need some quotes about this part

-Possible Fourth scene: Soporific effects
--Laughing over words

-Conclusion

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